Firstly, I'm really glad you found this story interesting and engaging. I'm flattered that you are rereading. Thank you. :)

Secondly - a question - I am considering slightly rewriting the ending for when I release this as part of an anthology of fantasy stories. I have had second thoughts about Agnes getting killed. I think she should flee instead, possibly utilising her witch's power, with William pursuing her to the edge of the forest, then transforming into the Beast as before. What do you think?